The Feathers fell
floating on water
leaving ripples behind
as they sank to the depths
of the sea of my soul
and I know
that it's true
because I saw the rainbow
that winked at the moon
as it flew
to catch you
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4 comments:
Ahhhh *falls into puffy clouds that envelope her without a trace*
Such poetry! :D Not too detailed or mushy like mine, but simple and sweet. ^_^
What brought this one to mind?
I like your poems! They're not mushy, and they're really inspiring.
I don't remember what this poem was inspired by, actually. I found it in my current notebook, and I decided that I liked it.
*grins bashfully* My poems are only as good as the readers dare interpret them. Thanks so much for saying they're inspiring, though! It means a lot to me ^_^
Haha, little snippets of the past literary ideas are cool to turn over and bring back, eh?
I like your imagery, and really enjoy reading your poems. Keep them coming, please and thank you :).
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