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Thursday, October 7, 2010

Innocents

A star feel bleeding into a cloud

and stained it sunset-pink.
We watched it die
and thought to ourselves,
"Beautiful."

8 comments:

JJ said...

Poignant.

Anonymous said...

:( well this was sad

Maria Sondule said...

Lol the only sad one and its the one you comment on!

Vizarya said...

Did you mean "fell"?

This looks/sounds familiar to me, but it's no less poignant or powerful with the simplistic imagery that says it all.

Anonymous said...

Its the only one I understood Maria :P

Anonymous said...

It's indeed sad, but no one is innocent in my eyes.

Maria Sondule said...

That's sort of the message of the poem...

JJ said...

Is it? Blow me. So mechanical pencils are deep as well as elegant. Mmm. The ripples on the holodeck are shifting.